This is a story written by my third grade friend and neighbor , Sadie H.
The Creepy Eyeball
Characters: Sadie, aka “Starlight”
Rae, aka “Moon”
Once there was Moon and Starlight. Strarlight drew an all-seeing eye on Moon’s whiteboard. They didn’t know that it would come to life. One day, they were looking at the whiteboard, and the eye was no longer there. They looked all over Moon’s house for the eyeball, and finally after much searching, they found the eyeball in Moon’s closet. THE EYEBALL WAS ALIVE!
The eyeball had become two feet from upper lid to bottom lid and three feet across from corner to corner. Moon wondered how it had traveled from the whiteboard to the closet. It had no legs. Starlight pointed out that it had probably rolled. They set up a video camera to see where it moved next. On the camera, they saw it go under Moon’s king-sized bed, so they knelt down and looked under the bed. It was gone!
Starlight said to Moon, “Where did it go?” Moon said, I don’t know–beats me!” Finally, they went to the kitchen and turned on the oven to make their lunch. It was then they saw the eyeball cooking in the oven! They decided to leave the eyeball in the oven to die.
Stay tuned to the next chapter…
HAPPY HALLOWEEN, AND HAPPY READING
4 thoughts on “Guest Writer, SADIE H., age 8”
This is very creepy, Sadie. It’s incredible what you can do with words. Yours have travelled across the Atlantic ocean to a very old city on the south coast of England and given me goosebumps.
I did NOT expect the eyeball to end up in the oven of all places.
I wonder what else Starlight will draw on Moon’s whiteboard and if that will come to life too and do extraordinary things.
I hope Starlight and Moon have lots more adventures.
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Hi Ms. Bridget,
I can’t believe a real author read my story! There will be another story about Starlight and Moon soon. Mrs. Rae has your book on how to write, and we are going to read parts of it together.
“THE EYEBALL WAS ALIVE!”
And then the eyeball is cooking in the oven? What a scary, scary story!
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Thanks for checking this out. Another story is coming out soon.